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Post by kappa on Sept 4, 2019 18:01:22 GMT -6
In the Small, Hawaiian town of Kaneohe, Kappa watches Oliver Tree do tricks in the woods.
"So, uh, kingfaraday made a request." Kappa cringes as Oliver falls flat on his face, his legs quickly flip backwards and his bruised head, drenched in blood, looking up at the sky as his injured body trembles in pain and misery.
"Normally, I don't do commissions. For a number of reasons. Mainly, cause I don't consider my quality of work of that level, and though a monetary compensation is not necessarily involved, that specific example of commissions sounds very unappealing. Getting paid to write, on paper, sounds killer, but it would take away the fun for me."
"Why are you not helping me?!" Oliver struggles to keep consciousness, his glasses shattered, with scattered teeth plotted into the dirt.
Kappa flicks his fingers and Oliver returns to his pre-crashed state. His hands holding the handle bar of his scooter, he contemplates trying that trick one more time!
"Truth is, I'm on a weird mood right now and writing just feels good. Ya know? So, I'm gonna do a second story with Oliver, with a storyline I made as a possible option in the previous thread."
"The Go Go Dancer one?" Oliver guesses correctly.
Kappa nods.
"Hey, kingfaraday, just so you know, Kappa put that in cause he randomly thought about an old episode of The Suite Life of Zack and Cody!"
It was the episode where they start a kids club, hire Go Go Dancers with little research, and end up with senior citizens dancing around in cages.
"I love Brenda Song."
"Me too."
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Post by kappa on Sept 4, 2019 18:25:24 GMT -6
Oliver Tree loves volunteering at Retirement Homes. ... It's just... Well, he goes a little overboard with the dramatics. Nurse Garcia, who knows enough about Oliver at this point, expects this kind of visual behavior when he shows up every Third Friday of the Month. "Doesn't that hurt?" The Middle Aged Latina in blue scrubs shakes her head at the parking lot, in the parking spot designated just for Oliver. "Eh." Oliver shrugs. "You know, I'm not religious, but even I get taken back by this level of sacrilege." "Oh, so if the Beetles do it, Grandma to this day gets wet for Paul McCartney, but, when I do it, it's too far?" Nurse Garcia sighs. "Just... Just get in the damn rec room, Oliver!" "Kay." Todays activity? Oliver is going to spend quality time with former, elderly Go Go Dancers and their granddaughters!
| The Direction | The Limitations | The End Game | | The Grandmas know what Oliver is capable of | Oliver has a buncha of Magical cages and special prizes to entices the kiddies to dance with their grannies! | The cage is where the magic is. Dance in the cage, get the cha-cha-cha-cha- changes! | Oliver isn't a monster. This is an experience, nothing more. Everything that happened can and will be reversed. However the mental tole? That's the question!
| | The Grandmas are oblivious to Oliver's Mischief | It was presented as a simple dance class between grandma and granddaughter. A lotta the kids were forced to attend, a lotta of the Grandmas are barely able to stand, let alone dance. Naturally, this will change with a little time and some groovy tunes! | The changes stop when the Grandmas are satisfied with their one on one type with the grandkids. | Yeah, Direction means Grandmas get their youths and grandkids get canned in nursing homes in the End. Just feels right, yeah?! |
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Post by kingfaraday on Sept 4, 2019 18:32:07 GMT -6
Grandmas are oblivious
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Post by kingfaraday on Sept 4, 2019 18:36:39 GMT -6
Thanks again and your writing is quality
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Post by kappa on Sept 4, 2019 19:22:46 GMT -6
"Hello, everyone, my name is Oliver Tree." Oliver introduces himself in a rec room, with a pug, wearing matching hats. "Weren't you on Kimmel?" A 16 year old asks with a risen hand. "As far as I know." Oliver nods, forcing the dog to nod as well. "Okay, on to the activity of the day. Dancing!" A 90 year old, stuck in a wheelchair, frowns at Oliver's light leg twist followed by a most elegant Tour en l'ai her glassed eyes had ever had the pleasure of seeing. Note: All Oliver did was a turn in the air, but it was so graceful, so well executed, several wrinkled hands began to clap and clap and clap and clap! "Today's all about fun with dear old gram-gram, kiddies. Can I see some smiles?" Oliver lifts his lips up with his left index finger and the dog's left paw.
| A | B | | Individual focus | Oliver focuses his attention on one particular grandma and granddaughter. | Oliver focuses on three sets of Grandmas and granddaughters. Focusing one pair at time. | | Group Focus | Oliver asks the five Grandmas and five granddaughters to introduce themselves. | Oliver doesn't need to know the names of anyone in the group. They came here to dance and that's all we're gonna do! That, and the obvious transfer of ages! 😹 |
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Post by kingfaraday on Sept 4, 2019 19:25:47 GMT -6
Individual b
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Post by kappa on Sept 4, 2019 20:32:47 GMT -6
| Grandma | Granddaughter | Style of Dance | | Set A | Agatha Riley, age 87. In a wheelchair, dementia | Ashely Riley, age 17. Got caught stealing her mom's mini van last weekend. | Go Go | | Set B | Janice Wolanski, age 83. Obese and Diabetic | Jessica Parker, age 16. Called her Mom the C word yesterday, the day before that, and this morning. | Ballet | | Set C | Carol Smith, age 90. Oxygen tank, wheelchair, partially blind | Miley Dean, age 17. Her Dad had a mild heart attack after catching her eat out the maid in the guest bathroom for weed. | The Charleston
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Post by kingfaraday on Sept 4, 2019 20:41:22 GMT -6
Set A
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Post by kappa on Sept 4, 2019 21:01:15 GMT -6
When Agatha Riley pushed into her thirties, she was at a very wild streak in life. Divorced, looking for fun, she joined the wild craze of Go Go Dancing at popular Night Club in California. Boy, oh, Boy, did she dance! And she danced well in her thirties, always a popular attraction, always desired, always admired. However, that chapter had to end when a pregnancy came to play. She eventually found work at a once well known fried chicken franchise, a manager until the late '80s when the company went bust, along with her youth! "I'm sorry, so it's just me and my grandma dancing?" Ashley Riley asks with crossed arms at the random musician volunteering at a retirement home. "Yep." Oliver bobbled his head. "It's gonna be psychedelic!" Grandma Riley smiles at the Strange, Short, Young man. He reminded her of an old customer she use to dance for in the mid '60. He was such a nice man. She missed dancing.
| A | B | | Something weird | As the music plays, Oliver dancing, he lifts Agatha out of her chair, worrying Ashely. | As the music plays, Ashely finds herself dancing with the rhythm. | | Something normal | Grandma Riley enjoys the music and claps along. | Oliver shows Ashely some moves Grandma Riley remembers fondly |
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Post by kingfaraday on Sept 4, 2019 21:07:19 GMT -6
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Post by kappa on Sept 5, 2019 8:28:46 GMT -6
Ashely Riley, age 17, was not a model child. She was problem, an immature, destructive problem. She stole her mom's mini van last Saturday, drove off to the beach with her friends, and got into a fender bender at a Taco Bell Drive Thru. As punishment, she has to take this class with her elderly, wheelchair ridden, grandma who often refers to Ashely as Rebecca, Ashely's Aunt. This was not in any way suppose to be fun. And yet... As the music played, Ashely found herself moving to the beat. "That's the ticket!" Oliver gives a thumbs up.
| A | B | | Focus on Ashley | She starts to get tired | We focus specifically on her dance moves | | Focus on Grandma Riley | She starts to get more energy, more pep in her step | She finds herself want to get out from the chair. |
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Post by niddlyby43 on Sept 5, 2019 8:39:56 GMT -6
Focus on Ashley A
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Post by timewarpee on Sept 5, 2019 14:38:39 GMT -6
Ashley and A
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Post by kingfaraday on Sept 5, 2019 14:46:20 GMT -6
Ashley A
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Post by kappa on Sept 5, 2019 17:26:34 GMT -6
Ashely watches as Oliver Tree gyrates his hips with with swish to the left and a swish to the right, his arms flailing like a controlled wave. "Can you move like this?!" Oliver asks Ashely and Grandma Riley. Grandma Riley shakes her head. No, that hasn't been the case in years! But Ashely, she takes the initiative and imitates Oliver's moves. Gyrating her own hips in a circular motion, she attempts to swish left and right... but finds herself getting quickly winded.
| A | B | | She keeps on moving | Eventually, she hurts her back! | Her knees start to irritate her! | | She needs to sit down! | She finds herself breathing heavily | She feels achy all over! |
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