Post by chronoeclipse on Dec 18, 2019 20:51:57 GMT -6
I'm glad to hear that people have been enjoying my newest story the Afternoon Hangout. As mentioned, i'm planning on writing a sequel sometime after the new year. I would love to hear any and all suggestions/thoughts/ideas for things you'd like to see happen in it! So this thread will kind of act like an interactive story thread except instead of weighing in on what you'd like to see happen as the story goes along you can give me your thoughts at the start and i'll do my best to work them through what I already have planned. I've already received some great thoughts in the contest thread that have got my brain firing, but i'm hoping the discussion can continue here.
Also feel free to ask any questions here about things you were unclear about in the story or things you would have like to have seen more of or happened differently etc.
Post by chronoeclipse on Dec 18, 2019 22:03:15 GMT -6
Yeah I will most likely include more music through time. One of my favorite parts of writing The Afternoon Hangout was plotting out the pop music from 2019 back through the 40s. There were a bunch of ways I could have gone and made about 4 different playlists.
I was thinking about doing something similar with a different genre in the sequel like Jazz to Rock & Roll to hair metal to like Imagine Dragons. It's kind of interesting to think about what someone that listens to say Post Malone now would listen to if they grew up in the 1940s.
With Miss Radcliffe scouling even in the picture of her youth it makes me think she would be suited for the goth scene or the grunge scene or both. No matter what though diffently a man eater
Ooo cranky old Miss Radcliffe as a sexy goth girl could be fun!
I just like the idea - if anyone here grew up in neighborhoods or communities with grumpy senior citizens who constantly complained about the kids and teens around - of the cranky old crone that's constantly screaming at the young people she sees to suddenly become one and seduce the boy whose life she's made a living hell over the past few years.
ark: Whooaaa that mattress scene
Jun 10, 2020 18:34:55 GMT -6
MeanMark: Right? I maintain the opinion that they should have showed some sort of process for the TF, but still a great scene nonetheless.
Jun 11, 2020 8:26:26 GMT -6
kappa: I feel like the point of that scene was a conversation towards her fears with monogamous long term relationship. The Aging was merely an extension personified, AND, in the backseat of what was really going on. A couple communicating.
Jun 11, 2020 9:13:11 GMT -6
kappa: However, I'd have enjoyed a gradual progression, still, I kinda get that execution
Jun 11, 2020 9:13:59 GMT -6
amoscrow: How do I post some WIPS on here? I wanna post some progress on something me and my GF are working on!
Jun 13, 2020 15:57:38 GMT -6
kappa: Not an expert, but, I think you just insert it on one of the square below the attachmentS
Jun 13, 2020 16:01:03 GMT -6
kappa: the group of boxes, the fourth one
Jun 13, 2020 16:01:34 GMT -6