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Post by chronoeclipse on Dec 14, 2017 16:24:06 GMT -6
Thanks for the comments and thoughts everyone. I really appreciate it. The 5 and final version of the story is posted. Now that it's all up there i'd love to hear from people what they specifically liked in it or had questions about or things they had wished I had done different etc.
Also which of the 5 scenes did you think worked the best?
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Post by addwulf on Dec 15, 2017 15:44:57 GMT -6
Like the third one the most. That's the one that slowed down the process. You have a gift for description. Don't have any ideas though.
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deptx
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Post by deptx on Dec 30, 2017 3:52:06 GMT -6
I really enjoyed all of them Chrono especially the transformations & reactions, though I would love to have had them slowed down a bit, but that is juat because your descriptions are so great. I also love the descriprions of their feet before & after, a bit rare in the genre & maybe a bit weird on my part lol but I am a bit of a foot man..talk about double fetishes lol
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