I didn’t mean to give you that feeling sorry, I was just quoting my comment so it was now the first, and also I wanted the same as before, so I was just trying to be the first comment so you would do it, sorry again
Oh no worries! I was just saying that to make it clear that if requests come in while i'm writing a new entry I might not be able to incorporate them into the story and that folks should do what you did - which is read the newest entry and make a new request accordingly! You're all good!
amanda and katie: physical: 60, mind: 13 zach: physical: same age, mind: 20
the mom: in her 20’s, mind 20 (doesn't know she’s amanda’s mom)
"Oh my gosh!" Amanda said bending down quickly to help her mom up but groaning from the pain in her now middle-aged joints.
As Diane came to, she youthened dramatically back through her 50s and 40s, the lines quickly disappeared from her face and the blonde came back to her hair. She went through her 30s and shed any additional weight she was carrying and her breasts perked back up - into her 20s were her skin completely smoothed and her hair shimmered. Soon a 20-year-old stood with help from the now greying 60-year-old Amanda.
"Are you all right?" Amanda asked her mom, who now looked younger than she had ever seen her.
"Um who are you? Where am I?" The young blonde woman asked confused.
"Mom! It's me, Manda! We're at home... you feinted." Amanda explained.
"Errggggh! These stupid questions are impossible! We're never going to get through this worksheet!" Katie said frustratedly as her veiny hand tossed her pencil down onto the table.
"Mom? I don't have any kids and you look old enough to be MY mom lady." Diane said to Amanda.
"What? No i'm only thir-" She stopped as she looked down at her older body, the saggy chest in her t-shirt, the leathery, loose arm flab, the thicker thighs... She grabbed a handful of her long hair and cried at the sight of how much grey was amongst the brown.
Katie looked up and screamed as well. "OMG Manda! You're like old!"
Amanda looked over at her friend, her friend now had a large pair of breasts but they were now pushing out her overalls about midway down her chest and her face looked wrinkled and kind of jowly as her red hair was dull and starting to go white in her pigtails.
"You too Katie! We look like a pair of shuffleboard players on a cruise ship!" She cried running over to hug her friend for support.
"How did this happen!?" Katie asked looking at the back of her veiny hands and then hefting her big boobs up and letting them flop back down. "Ew I have huge boobs but they're all floppy!"
"Oh my god please tell me Zach can't see me like this! If he thinks I'm some ugly old lady I'll just die!!" Amanda whined.
"Um, it looks like Zach's old too." Katie says pointing to the 55-year-old with the salt and pepper beard.
Amanda gasps. "Oh my god, he looks so distinguished! He's even hot as someone's gross old dad! Like George Clooney or Robert Downey Junior!" She swoons.
Katie rolls her tired eyes.
Zach, however, wasn't paying attention to the two 60-year-olds with the minds of 7th graders - he was focused on the pretty blonde woman who was looking around confused. He stood up, grimacing at his newly aching back and sauntered over holding out his hand to her.
"Uh, hey i'm Zach..." He said with a smile.
"Hi... i'm Diane. I have no idea how I got here or where here is." She said shaking his hand.
"No it's cool, it's cool, honestly I don't know how we got here either! But um... at least we're in this together right?" He said giving her an intense look.
Diane smirked at him pointing at the two older women huddled on the other side of the table. "Are one of these women your wife?"
Amanda perked up at that question and looked over at Zach hopefully, crossing both of her fingers. "Please say yes, please say yes!!"
"Uh no... no they're just like friends I guess?" Zach replied not taking his eyes off the pretty young blonde.
Amanda deflated and sadly slumped into her chair and tossed her older arms onto her school books in defeat.
"Do I know you?" Diane asked the man trying to understand what was going on.
"Nope but... I'd like to get to know you better..." Zach said smoothly, brushing some hair out of her face with his fingers.
Diane swatted his hand away and took a couple steps back. "Uh... I don't date guys old enough to be my dad..."
Amanda and Katie: physical 60, mentally 50 Diane: physically 25, mentally 25 Zach: the same for both
The house changed around them once more until they were in a classy upscale condo. The text book in Katie's hands was replaced with a tablet which she needed to put the reading glasses she had hanging around her neck on to read. She was dressed in a classy blouse and calve-length skirt that hid her veiny, cellulite-riddled thighs. Amanda had on an equally tasteful blouse and slacks, looking like a businesswoman nearing retirement.
Amanda put her veiny hands on her hips and glared at Zach who was now dressed in worn-out jeans and an untucked button-up.
"You're unbelievable! Some hot young tramp wanders into your line of sight and you just HAVE to go hit on her, don't you!" The graying brunette bellows at the scruffy middle-aged man.
Zach held his hands up defensively.
"Thank you." Diane said giving the older woman an appreciative smile.
"You can thank me by no longer flirting with my husband, missy!" Amanda said pointing her fingers at her eyes and then at Diane.
"But I wasn't-" She tried to say.
"I was just trying to help Diane figure out how we got here.... wait did you say husband!?" Zach gulped.
Amanda marched over to them but then stopped short like she had seen a ghost.
"Did you say your name is Diane?" She asked the pretty young woman.
The blonde nods her head looking very confused.
"Mother!? But how are you so young!? Katherine! Am I hallucinating!?" Amanda says reaching out to touch her mothers smooth cheek.
Katie gets off the couch with a groan and waddles over to the group and gasps at the sight of the 25 year old.
"My god! Mrs-" She says in amazement.
"What are you talking about!?" Diane says batting everyones hands away.
"But how did you get so young!? You're 75 years old!" Amanda says in astonishment.
"Um you're all crazy! I just turned 25! And I don't have any kids." Diane states firmly.
Amanda goes to her antique dresser to get some old photos from her mother's youth.
"Well if you found a way to become young again, you'll have to let us in on the secret! I wouldn't mind shedding a few years." Katie says with a chuckle.
Zach pulls Diane aside. "Hey - I don't know what's gotten into them but you're totally not crazy. Believe it or not - i'm only 20!"
Amanda- physically 65, mentally 50 Katie- physically and mentally 50, but seems to only shed years Mother- physically and mentally 30 Zack physically and mentally 20
"I know!" Diane responded as she aged a decade in front of him. Feint lines appeared on her face and she looked less like a college girl and more like a young professional. "You're lucky you're cute... I don't normally date younger guys!" She added with a wink, interlocking her fingers with Zach's hand.
Katie smiles admiringly at the young couple as some lines fade from her face and her hair gets a bit more red. She stays a plump middle-aged woman however.
Amanda walks back into the room holding a few photos. She looked older - her hair was more uniformly grey and her neck seemed looser as she marched back over to the 30-year-old blonde.
"I can't find any photos of you at - THIS - age but I found some current ones! This is what you're supposed to look like!" The 65-year-old said showing the photos to Diane of herself at the age of 75 with a 50-year-old Amanda.
Diane smirked at the pictures. "Well that's obviously not me. Those women look like they might be your sisters or something..." She said handing the photos back.
"My sisters? No this is me and my mother... I mean *you*... oh and who is this handsome young man?" Amanda asked noticing the young Zach, she smiled warmly at him and fluffed her grey hair subconsciously.
Diane wrapped her arm around the young muscular Zach, pulling him away from the retirement-age woman territoriality.
"This is my BOYFRIEND, Zach. So back off, old lady!" She stated firmly.
"Old? I'm not that old..." Amanda said defensively, sure her mother was much younger now, but she wasn't THAT much older than Diane...
Katie looked over at Amanda and did a double take. "Amanda dear, you are looking a bit er... run down...."
Amanda- physically 80, mentally 50 Katie- physically and mentally 50 Mother- physically and mentally 20 Zack physically and mentally 20
Amanda looked at her veiny hands and noticed them aging further, her fingers becoming arthritic and brown spots appearing on her skin as it wrinkled up. She reached up to feel her cheeks as they shriveled and slid down her face. Her back began to hunch giving the now elderly woman a bit of a stoop as she stared at the now fresh-faced blonde woman clinging to Zach and pointed a crooked finger at her.
"You're stealing my youth!!" Amanda cried in a shaky voice placing a hand on her stout redheaded friends shoulder for support.
Diane backed away defensively shaking her head.
"No i'm not! I-I don't know whats happening to you. But I have nothing to do with it!" She insisted not letting go of Zach.
"Mother! Look at me! I'm older than you now! I'm only 50 years old!" Amanda began to sob.
"Um actually... you're only 27." Zach said timidly.
All three women turned and looked at the young man in shock.
ark: Whooaaa that mattress scene
Jun 10, 2020 18:34:55 GMT -6
MeanMark: Right? I maintain the opinion that they should have showed some sort of process for the TF, but still a great scene nonetheless.
Jun 11, 2020 8:26:26 GMT -6
kappa: I feel like the point of that scene was a conversation towards her fears with monogamous long term relationship. The Aging was merely an extension personified, AND, in the backseat of what was really going on. A couple communicating.
Jun 11, 2020 9:13:11 GMT -6
kappa: However, I'd have enjoyed a gradual progression, still, I kinda get that execution
Jun 11, 2020 9:13:59 GMT -6
amoscrow: How do I post some WIPS on here? I wanna post some progress on something me and my GF are working on!
Jun 13, 2020 15:57:38 GMT -6
kappa: Not an expert, but, I think you just insert it on one of the square below the attachmentS
Jun 13, 2020 16:01:03 GMT -6
kappa: the group of boxes, the fourth one
Jun 13, 2020 16:01:34 GMT -6