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Post by redloves6 on Feb 24, 2022 18:42:18 GMT -6
Hi everyone, Some of you on this board may be familiar with my story Early Retirement which was originally featured on a different story site. I've decided to remove it from there, and hasn't been accessible for a number of weeks now, but for those interested, you can now find the story on my new blog here: redlovesfiction.blogspot.com/I am planning on doing a pretty extensive overhaul of Early Retirement at some point in the future, so as to be in a much stronger state for me to continue it and (hopefully) eventually finish. The reason I ended up leaving it after so long was that there were just too many story elements I personally didn't think were working anymore, and I had written myself into something of a corner. The expansions and changes I plan to make should get around that problem, but I wanted to make sure the original was still available for people who enjoyed it. I also plan on adding a lot more content to this blog when I get the chance. Given my already poor track record of keeping up to date with stories, I won't even try and promise any hard dates or deadlines, but I have lots of different story concepts I've been working on and most of them involve age progression to some degree, so do keep an eye out for more content. And for those reading Early Retirement for the first time, I hope you enjoy it. Red.
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Post by bob on Feb 24, 2022 20:18:42 GMT -6
I love this story! Happy to hear that it may get a conclusion!
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Post by Kappa on Feb 24, 2022 23:39:04 GMT -6
I genuinely enjoyed the direction you went. Early Retirement is one of my favorite TF Stories.
Superficially, it feeds on both my AP and WG Fetish, however, on a deeper level, it engages me literarily, it forces me to look at the imagery, to explore the metaphor, to really take note on the character, the dialogue, the scene. It made me think and it made others think. You wrote a very powerful and very passionate piece of work.
It's fun. And I hope you had fun and I hope you continue to have fun. Whether you finish or not, that's fine by me, thank you for sharing.👍
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Post by thetreerollins on Mar 4, 2022 8:13:06 GMT -6
Same as Lion Share. I found it to be a unique AP fetish story. It's very easy to be trope-y in AP stories and fall into certain rhythms, but character exploration is underrated and can make things distinct, and it felt like you were doing that. I had wondered where the story was going though? But I loved the imagery. Can't wait to read the updates to it.
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Post by timewarpee on Apr 19, 2022 18:54:56 GMT -6
Would love to see more of this story. I definitely see a hearing aid coming for Margaret, as well as her seeing her age continuing to increase with the next time she sees her license it shows she is just over 70. She also starts getting social security and retirement pay. Her boyfriend meets the witchy lady and finds himself an old man--around 80 or so. Margaret and the now "old boyfriend" somehow run into each other at Easy Springs and gradually begin to enjoy each other's company. Margaret also joins a senior excercise class and mallwalkers group from time to time.
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