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Post by 123anon987 on Apr 19, 2022 15:16:13 GMT -6
Just an idea, give suggestions. Working on others aswell, but thought of this Snow White story summary: Mirror says Snow white will be fairest. Evil queen sends huntsman. Snow white escapes to dwarves. 10 years later, Snow white is 17 and Queen poisons her, gives her coma. King finds snow white, ends coma, marries. They both compete for hand of king, queen is worried about losing her beauty --1) apple ages her and puts her in coma, a kiss rejuvinates her --2) same as story, except she ages rapidly when kissed from coma --3)she ages as she is in coma, when found by king, she is old --4)snow white (or something random) moderately increases rate of aging for both, making the young snow white more and more beautiful and the queen more and more ugly. Queen is reaching old age faster, and Snow White is reaching her blossom of womanhood faster --maybe combine this with another --5) bodice lace ages her, de-ages when taken off, then apple ages her and puts in coma, kiss rejuvinates, ---maybe combine with both queen and snow white aging faster aswell en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Snow_White_and_the_Seven_Dwarfs_(1937_film)original brothers grimm story: sites.pitt.edu/~dash/grimm053.htmlweb.archive.org/web/20131021184126/http://www.ctzine.com/the-evolution-of-snow-white-magic-mirror-on-the-wall-who-is-the-fairest-one-of-all/en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Snow_Whiteen.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Evil_Queen#In_derivative_workswww.chron.com/life/article/Are-you-Team-Snow-White-or-Team-Evil-Queen-3438997.phpagingwomen.freeforums.net/thread/28/queens-revenge-sequel-white-chapter
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Post by keith943 on Apr 19, 2022 16:26:31 GMT -6
--5) bodice lace ages her, de-ages when taken off, then apple ages her and puts in coma, kiss rejuvinates, ---maybe combine with both queen and snow white aging faster aswell.
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Post by 123anon987 on May 3, 2022 15:32:37 GMT -6
She was about 33; he in his late 20's The queen had given him a union with a very important kingdom, and all potential suitors to the king were either married, too old, blood relatives, or too far away for him to consider. Even if she were no longer desirable, she would have the most powerful king in the explored world curled around her finger. That being said, she prided herself on being the fairest in the land. As the mirror always said.
Until Snow White arrived.
She was the 7 year old daughter of a noble family up north who left her in the Kings castle to give her an education. Her skin was as white as snow, her hair as black as ebony, and her lips as red as blood. For a child, she was quite pretty.
Just shortly after she arrived, the queen satisfied her vainity in the mirror as he usually did.
"Mirror mirror on the wall, who is the fairest of them all?" "You of course, your majesty." "The fairest as expected, I am and always w-" "But there is one who will one day become the fairest, someone other than you" "What! How! That cannot be allowe!-" "Snow White, when she grows into maturity, will be fairer than you stand now, and the difference shall be all the greater after time takes its course on each of you" "I'm still just in my prime now, but as years pass and I leave the prime of beauty, and she enters it--" the queen thought. "Its okay Gwen dear. I shall give you a sizeable pension and a large share of land when the time comes." The king said casually. He appeared very focused on the mirror, though it only showed blackness.
The queen was most certainly not willing to lose her husband, and control over the such a powerful kingdom. To think; all her riches, and power, and her man; gone. Some younger woman becoming more beautiful then she, and stealing everything from her? No, she would NOT allow that.
Against the queens wishes, the king publicly declared his future marriage to Snow White. Her parents gave their blessing, and almost all were pleased. Of course, the king was aware the queen might try something in the 11 years until Snow White was of marriageable age. Snow White was under constant guard, the queen under watch outside her private quarters, and great pains taken to keep them apart outside of dinner and shared events. The king made it clear that if anything befell his future bride that wasn't obviously NOT done by the queen, she would immediately be presumed guilty, and given an excecution rather than a plot of land.
"Look at her; just 7 years old. How could my husband think of marrying her, even when she matures. Regardless, I am still the fairest yet." She thought.
However, just a few months after her arrival. The situation got even worse. Up in her tower, the queen was using her black magic to attempt to attain eternal youth. Before her was a small cake, layered white and black, to put the enchantment into. A fairy, flying to the source of this loud, unholy magic, immediately knew what the queen attempted, having heard rumours of the king's marriage proposal to Snow White. Rather than letting the spell fail, the mischievous sprite altered it so as to make the consumer age 2 year every month. The spell finished with a crash of thunder. The queen eagerly took a slice of the cake and ate it. "And any who eat this cake shall now have the time of 2 year's pass in a month! Enjoy!" The fairy exclaimed, appearing from thin air. The queen was astonished. But it was too late. She had already swallowed an entire slice. "No! No! Get back you-" The fairy vanished again. And so too had the rest of the cake, the queen noticed.
In Snow Whites chambers, the fairy and cake suddenly appeared. Snow White turned from her book to see her. "Snow White, the queen through witchcraft has made time for her pass much quicker. She will be abandoned by the king soon enough. You too can accelerate time, and due to your not yet being mature, would rapidly come into your beauty and maidenhood ahead of schedule, rather than become a forlorn hag as the queen has to look forward to. Eat this cake, and you won't have to wait many years to be married to the richest and most powerful man known. You could have everything you could possibly want now."
"Hmm, if there's no need to wait..." "Nope, you would become the fairest in the land in little time at all" The cake tasted sweet.
While the queen was always vaniful, this morning she was especially anxious in the mirror.
Skin a flawless, clear, porcelain white. A slim, narrow waist. Accented by a large womanly bosom, yet with all the pert youth of a maiden just at marriageable age. Her arms trim, her legs long, sleek and feminine. Her brown hair luscious, except--a single grey hair. She plucked it fiercely--looked around-- "Good morning Gwen" The king had been observing her the entire time. Already, the vultures were circling their prey.
She was the fairest in the land! Could the spell already be having an affect on her? It didn't matter. Snow White would need 11 years to become a potential wife. There were no other candidates. So regardless what happened, the queen was secure for atleast 11 years. She could probably reverse the spell before then anyways. "I will stay the one and ONLY wife of the greatest king alive" she cackled in her mind.
The king, queen, and Snow White were having breakfast together that morning.
"My compliments to the chef who made that cake yesterday, it was wonderful." an innocent, 7 year old Snow White said with casual cheer.
The queen was astonished. "What!?! Cake!?" She thought, barely keeping the words from leaving her mouth. "What cake was this?" The king asked. "Oh, it was small, layered white and black. Quite good." "No! That was what happened to the rest of it. That miscreant fairy GAVE it to her, thats what happened." The queen was panicking in her head.
Naively, Snow continued: "a fairy said that the queen would age faster, 2 years a month, and now that I've eaten it, the same too with me." "Really? Both you and the queen will age faster now? Gwen, is this true? Never lie to me." It would be best to be honest. "Yes m'lord. A spell gone awry has made time pass much faster for both of us." "Hmm, how unfortunate." This would mean he would get a new, prettier wife sooner. His Gwen was still the fairest, but it was clear she wouldn't be for long. The sooner he could trade up, the better. The queen would grow uglier, her Snow White would grow more beautiful, till she became fairer than the queen herself!. She couldn't deny this. The queen thought she had 11 safe years of power and luxury to sort out this problem. Now, she had less than 6 months!
When the king had be searching for a wife, and the mirror proclaimed her the fairest in all the land, she found it only natural. She was the most beautiful woman known on earth. She never thought it might fade, that she could lose her title.
And now, for this little girl to usurp her! It wasn't fair. They were old enough to be mother and daughter. How could she compete against such a younger woman? No woman was immune to the ravages of time. Did men expect women to stay youthful, flawless, statues without any sag of breast, softening of flesh or wrinkling of face indefinitely, matter how many pregnancies or decades of time she endured? Was it just inevitable that she be replaced? The older woman giving way to the younger upstart? As even one day the fair Snow White might?
All that mattered was that Snow White needed to be stopped.
3 and 1/2 months had passed, and the queen wasn't yet able to end the spell. Snow White however, was starting to blossom into a young woman, being biologically 14. Her literally snow white skin, sweet demeanor, heavenly voice and gorgeous smile were famed throughout the kingdom. All the boy's on the cusp of manhood could'nt help but fall in love with her beauty and virtue. Though they became terribly lonesome with the knowledge she was betrothed to the king alone, they were over joyed that they were granted a sight of the legendarily fair young damsel. She was waifish, but a girlish bosom was beginning to sprout, making a chest-bulge under her dress. Her snow white cheeks had a pretty rouge tinge, accented by deep red lips on a girlish face entering womanhood. All knew she would grow up to be a beautiful bride, likely the fairest maiden in the land.
The queen was naked before the mirror, her husband still asleep. She was effectively now 40. She never thought it could come to this. There were multiple grey hairs weaved into her hair. Too many to keep ripping out. Watching her mortality over these last few months was horrifying. Her womanly bust had lowered and emptied minorly but noticeably, like a pretty young bride after too much birthing and child nursing. Even though the queen's temple of a body had never been ripped or sucked due to motherhood. The teats had lost their girlish pink, now a "mature" brown. Her waist and thighs had gone thickish, covered in a layer of fat. Worst of all, her fair skin of fame had a "weathered" look to it, no longer a porcelain white in many places. And it wasn't smooth anymore, like a beautiful damsel's ought to be. It had the roughness of death and disease. Would any man have taken her as a wife had she looked like this before her suitors? She pushed that thought aside. She didn't dare ask the mirror who the fairest was. She feared that a middle aged woman with a slight paunch, withered grey hairs and drooping mother-parts would no longer be the fairest of all women. BUT SHE HAD TO BE THE FAIREST! Thats who she was. None were more beautiful than her. She must redouble her efforts on sorcery, so that she would ALWAYS be the fairest.
"Ugh, she's starting to become a hag." The king thought, staring at his wife while pretending to be asleep. "At least I will have the fairest maiden in the land share my bed in just a few months time. "Its such a shame beautiful women become such ugly matrons after time. Hopefully this wife will find something which can be used to keep Snow White pretty forever. I can't imagine such a pretty young woman suffering this fate."
Now biologically 15, Snow White was an icon of purity and maidenhood. Whenever she sang, forest critters flocked to hear the sweet, enchanting voice. She loves singing, and was often accompanied by birds and squirrels around the castle or on her walks in the forest. This irritated the queen greatly. As though Snow White were just better than her. Purer than her. Ugh, that brat.
One day, Snow White was singing in the woods, as she often did. A bright blue bird landed on her shoulder. "Oh, how do you do, cute little creature?".
She was getting more and more beautiful, as the queen was getting uglier and uglier.
Her black head of hair gleamed midnight in waves down to her back.
"Oh and they're still growing. Boy does that get me..." His current wife, the queen, stared daggers at him while covering her aged bosom self-consciously.
The king and queen had not more than shared a bed for months. This was bad. The bed chambers had been the queen's main source of power over her husband. Without that, she was just a adornment on the kings riches and power.
She noticed a whole streak of grey in her now dry frizzy hair, which once was entirely smooth and black as ebony. Marring the flawless skin of her namesake, wrinkles stretched from her eyes and mouth. The harsh, damaging sun had put rough pigmented splotches on her once porcelain, snow white skin. One day a red-haired young woman had come before the royal court. The king would not take his gaze off this new youthful beauty the entire day. Snow White knew then, that the king had begun looking for a new wife.
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Post by keith943 on May 3, 2022 19:27:52 GMT -6
If the storyline going to have the female characters such as the queen and Sleeping Beauty gradually age progress over 120 years or more than maybe consider basing of these comic book pictures with the super extremely age progressed female. But you may not be thinking that way I was simply trying to point it out if you were.
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